Main shoot - Reflections

We again got feedback on our final edit from our first main shoot, the points from which we used to improve our opening for the second main shoot.



We need to:

• shoot the scenes we missed out
• reshoot from where the Henchman runs in
• cut down the chase scene to make it more exciting
• add more dialogue if possible
• make sure the audience clearly sees the device
• remove any continuity errors e.g. where the device appears in Leora's hand, or where she jumps over a log then appears running up a hill
• find a future skyline
• make it more apparent that the characters know each other -  we can achieve this by adding more dialogue